Basalt Heart

Basalt Heart

I woke on the sand where silence breaks like glass,
a splintered dawn wedged beneath my eyelids—
salt stings the scrapes Father left
before the boat and I split company.

Here the sea is a broken record,
grooved with gull-cries and static.
A rust-freckled radio skulks under driftwood;
its knobs spin like orphan planets,
yet all its mouths offer
is hiss, hiss, hiss—
I understand that language.

I build
a citadel of coral and caution,
mortared with muteness.
No print but mine dents the beach;
even the crabs keep respectful distance,
clinking armour like distant cutlery
from a banquet I never attended.

At night the palms clatter,
jointed dolls wound too tight.
I count the cogs in their creaking,
measure how far fear travels
when wind turns the world into engine.

I tell myself
I am the basalt heart of this place,
hard, igneous, immune.
Feelings are flammable;
I bury them deep in the cooled magma
where no match can strike.

If rescue sails
I shall lower the sky like a shutter,
paint SOS backward on the horizon
so no one can read it.
I have learnt: company bruises.

Yet sometimes
a turtle carves slow runes in sand;
moonlight fits my shoulders like borrowed cloth,
and I recall
a room, a lullaby,
someone promising the earth was kind.

The tide leans close,
offering questions shaped like shells.
I tuck them beneath my tongue,
keep them unasked—
a hoard for the day
the basalt cracks
and something green
dares the air.

Bob Lynn | © 2025 Vox Meditantis. All rights reserved.

22 responses to “Basalt Heart”

  1. Rall avatar
    Rall

    Hmm….I understand that language too. Your poem Is lusciously lyrical… sprinkled with impressive alliteration….a sea song tinged with sadness, Beautiful poem!

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      Thank you so much. It was triggered by hearing Paul Simon’s “I Am a Rock” on the radio and it flowed from there – drawing on some of those shadowy corners we all carry around – things that apparently still had something to say.

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      1. Rall avatar
        Rall

        And a rock feels no pain
        And an island never cries
        Still remember all the words
        Oh dear
        What’s that polite way of saying ancient
        I think we’re in that advanced age group:)

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  2. yvettemcalleiro avatar

    This is absolutely gorgeous, Bob! The imagery and alliteration are so beautiful. I love it!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      Thank you so much Yvette! I’m thrilled the imagery came through – I could see that beach so clearly when I was writing. The alliteration just seemed to happen naturally, like the poem was finding its own rhythm. Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!

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  3. Stonehead avatar

    Bob, this is a poem crafted to be spoken. The rhythm snapped into place when I read it aloud, while the images coil and uncoil like waves hitting the shore. I was struck by how your lines carry both grit and music: “the sea is a broken record, / grooved with gull-cries and static” feels tactile and sonically charged, particularly as I’m sitting with my turntable turning behind me (Back At The Chicken Shack, Jimmy Smith). So, too, with “clinking armour like distant cutlery / from a banquet I never attended.”

    What I admired most was how the voice hardens itself—“I am the basalt heart of this place”—yet betrays flickers of longing, especially in those final stanzas where the moonlight and the turtle’s runes open cracks in the armour. It’s a poem about survival, but also about the cost of refusing rescue.

    Your poem goes beyond narrative and delivers into immersive world-building, enhanced by the superb vocalisation, while the tension between defiance and vulnerability keeps it alive line by line.

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    1. Stonehead avatar

      “delves” not “delivers”. Auto-correct!

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      1. Bob Lynn avatar

        Thank you so much for this incredibly thoughtful response Dennis – it means the world to receive such a close, careful reading of the work. You’ve identified something I was hoping would emerge: that tension between the protective shell and the cracks where vulnerability seeps through. Writing from the perspective of someone who’s had to armour themselves whilst still being fundamentally human felt like walking a tightrope.

        I’m particularly moved that you picked up on the sonic elements. You’re absolutely right about it being crafted for the voice – I found myself testing each line aloud, listening for where the rhythm would snap taut or release. That “broken record” image came from thinking about how trauma can make us repeat patterns, but also how the sea itself is repetitive yet never quite the same. The fact that you were reading it with Jimmy Smith spinning behind you adds such a perfect layer – that interplay between broken records and living music.

        Your observation about “refusing rescue” cuts right to the heart of what I was exploring. Sometimes the very mechanisms that help us survive become the walls that keep us isolated. The basalt metaphor felt essential because volcanic rock is born from such intense heat and pressure, yet it can crack and allow new growth.

        The turtle’s runes and that final image of “something green” were my attempt to suggest that even in the most protected spaces, life finds ways to emerge. Thank you for seeing how the voice both hardens and betrays itself – that’s exactly the complexity I hoped to capture.

        Your attention to craft and meaning together is such a gift. Comments like yours remind me why we write: for that moment of recognition between writer and reader.

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      2. Stonehead avatar

        I don’t comment as often as is perhaps expected with communal prompts because I spend considerable time with a poem: reading, re-reading, and reading again. I question my response, ponder the poet’s intentions, and almost certainly over-analyse the choice of words, punctuation and spacing. It’s time consuming. Enjoyable, but consuming. And then I have to formulate a response. As a result, I tend to only respond to poems that prompt “wow, what have we here?” Hence today’s effort.

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      3. Bob Lynn avatar

        Your careful approach – reading, re-reading, questioning – makes your ‘wow’ responses infinitely more valuable than quick reactions. That you invested such time in my work truly humbles me. Quality engagement enriches poetry communities.

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  4. ben Alexander avatar

    Bob, this is quietly staggering. “I am the basalt heart of this place” resonates so powerfully—defiant, yet deeply human in its longing.

    ~David

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      David – thank you for seeing that tension in the basalt heart line – capturing defiance whilst revealing the raw humanity underneath felt crucial. Your reading of that quiet contradiction means everything.

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  5. Stine Writing and Miniatures avatar

    I read a sense of confusion almost, not sure whether to reject where they are or enjoy it and give in.

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      Thank you – you’ve captured something essential there – that push-pull between safety and connection. The speaker has crafted their own prison, yet can’t fully silence the longing. That confusion felt vital to explore.

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  6. lesleyscoble avatar

    Bob, your poem is masterful—quite astonishing in its quiet affect.

    Lines like “silence is glass”, “the sea is a broken record”, and one of my favourites, “moonlight fits my shoulders like a borrowed cloth”, are startling and vivid. 

    So too is:

    “crabs keep respectful distance, clinking armour like distant cutlery / from a banquet I never attended.”

    The poem moves as though from a breath held in the lungs too long—flowing from survival to memory, then culminating into that exceptional line:

    “something green / dares the air.”

    A final green shoot of hope.

    I could go on… but, as PotW I’ve got 20 plus more poems to read!

    This is a poem I should love to spend more time with and narrate from memory.

    I reckon this is something of a masterpiece.

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      Lesley, thank you for such generous, detailed feedback – and for setting a challenge that pushed me into territory I hadn’t explored before. Your observation about “breath held too long” perfectly captures what I was reaching for. That you’d want to narrate it from memory is the highest compliment possible.

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      1. lesleyscoble avatar

        I feel privileged that my prompt had a small part to play in your poem’s conception 💗

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  7. Violet Lentz avatar

    Beautifully crafted, Bob. The visuals were stunning.

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    1. Bob Lynn avatar

      Thank you Violet – I really focused on making the island feel tangible and alive. Knowing the visuals worked means everything, especially with such vivid imagery being crucial to the poem’s impact.

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  8. ben Alexander avatar

    hi, Bob 💗

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Dennis, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #170: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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